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everyone has his own dream. Everyone's dream is different. I also have my own dream. I have a dream. I hope to have a farm. So i work hard for my dream.I have a dream. I hope to have a farm. On the farm, there is a big house and a limpid river, and some fruit trees.On my farm: during spring, the tress give welcome shades...
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