麻烦大家帮忙看看这句话里面有语法错误吗，错在哪给讲解下吧，非常感谢好心人~！

显示全部楼层 · 2013-4-7 11:52:20

首先，你的名词大哥大是单数的，后面的are却是复数用的，因此大哥大后面应该加s变成复数。so long前面请加上for。其实上把time删掉会更通顺，不用怕，没关系的。normally换成properly会更通顺，前面两条是语法问题，请修正。后面两条只是为了通顺的修改，看楼主自己定夺。以上。...

千问 · 2013-4-7 11:52:20

so long time that 改为 such long time thatsome 应该和others搭配，有点重复，从句可直接改为：some can not work normally,others need two battery for charging alternately....

千问 · 2013-4-7 11:52:20

The walkie-talkies have been used for such a long time so that some of them can not work normally. One walkie-talkie needs two batteries for charging alternately. 注意下单复数：）...