帮我看看我写的英语句子有语法错吗？

显示全部楼层 · 2012-2-20 11:06:34

designed 和 released是过去分词；ranking 是现在分词都是非谓语动词，单独不作谓语。句子缺少谓语Angry Birds, ( was ) designed by Jackke Lisalo and released( in)December,2009,ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store.Or Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released inDecember,2009,ranks the first of the most popular gam...

千问 · 2012-2-20 11:06:34

ranking the first ...语法不对。建议这样改（并简洁化）：Angry Birds, designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December, 2009, ranks as Apple's most popular game....

千问 · 2012-2-20 11:06:34

这个句子没有谓语Angry Birds,designed by Jackke Lisalo and released on December,2009,is ranking the first of the most popular games in Apple Store....