我这有一篇英语演讲稿，请帮我看一下哪有错：Hello!Everyone!Today is Thursday,April 18th.The weather

显示全部楼层 · 2013-4-17 21:35:01

The weather is sunny.太汉语化，改成It's sunny .put out 换成put away,收起来的意思T-shirt后面加s变复数I think, I will be not sure that you are right改成I don't think you will be right.So summer is coming .Lets welcome it together改成As summer is coming ,lets welcome it together.更好一些。...

千问 · 2013-4-17 21:35:01

说天气的时候最好用it is不要穿得太少一句：建议改成take a coat with you in order to keep warm.you are right 改成you are safe....

千问 · 2013-4-17 21:35:01

英文起码要有大小写的区别吧？...