for me应为:to me; interested应为:interesting;yearning industry没有这种说法, 但你可以说:I have a deep yearning for this industry;look forward in the future应为look forward to the future....
你感觉不错!果然有问题呢!简单修改如下:Automobile manufacturing for me is a very【 interested——interesting】and also a great yearning industry, which makes me look forward 【very much】.祝你开心如意!...