英文部分的错误：1. Today is such a trouble day 该句中的trouble改为terrible/awful, 表示“糟糕的”应用terrible/awful, trouble一般不能直接加名词。2.that's why I'm so want to drink a very cold coke.I'm改为I 因为am不能与want连用。3. But when I was enter one mall. was enter改为enteredenter的过去式是entered，不借助于was 4. They were only put a very expensive drink...
Today it is such a troublesome day,andthat's why Iwant very much to drink a very cold coke cola. But when Ienter one a mall, I find thereareonlyvery expensive drink...
Todaywas sotrouble thati wanted todrink a cup of cold coke very much.But when Ientered the first mall. There wresome expensivewhich so-called "sport drink" in their...
trouble改为terrible更好
so不能用来修饰动词再把前面的am去掉 coke不可数 去掉a 把was去掉were去掉 Then I changed my mind中的then改为so order前加to include前的was去掉 begger加s beg改为begging
ask改...
