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1. Jim was very tired walking.2. he rested on a big stone.3. after drinking some water4/5. He was so tired that he didn't wake up until evening6. He was just about to jump7/8. when he felt something moving near his feet.9. Jim was too frightened to move.10. The snake began to crawl across his leg.11/12. Jim jumpe...
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1. Jim was very tired walking.2. he rested on a big stone.3. after drinking some water4/5. He was so tired that he didn't wake up until evening6. He was just about to jump...
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千问 | 2012-3-5 19:50:31 | 显示全部楼层
in改为at,very 改为too, not 改为no, lied 改为lay, much改为 so,has改为 was, move改为 moving, up改为 down, 去掉not ,去掉off...
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