I like traveling around the world with my father. 缺动词One day,wewent to Hong Kong. 时态错On first day,we went to Disney Park with them. 介词不对 不过问题不大There were many games 时态问题We were so excited that we eat many food,but 。。。自己看吧~We stayed there for about three hours.时态~It wasa short time and it was a big shame,too.But w...