结合大家的答案我觉得我的修改如下I love sweets.前半句肯定没错 sweets复数表示糖果but I don't eat it any more.这句话我觉得有2个错误don`t一般现在时不能凸显我将来不再吃了的情况所以建议换成won`t另外更具有道词典sweets属于复数Sweets are foods that have a lot of sugar. 甜食所以最好改成them所以有了I love sweets.but I won`t eat them any more.加油哦~！...
