第一句话，还可以了，就是above用的，我个人觉得不太恰当：Components mentioned above shall be processed so as to meet the standard requirements prior to primer painting.还有就是，and meet，您用的是，我觉得这个主语不同，您不能说是以上构件满足要求，而是经过处理以后的构件的表面，满足涂装的要求，这里我用了 so as to。 The surface of steel plate cleaned with shot blasting shall achieve Sa 2.5 (Near White ). 用了一个过...
[务必] 翻译为must 比shall 更贴切。[符合规范要求] 用 comply with 更佳。抛丸清理 - shot blast cleaning近白级 - 不能用near ,可以用 nearly 或 close to The above components must be processed (treated) to compl...
两个主要问题：1、中文“以上”的意思没有正确表达。 2、应用被动语态表达第二句。所以整个应该改为：1、The above mentioned components shall betreated to comply with the standard requirements before primer painting coat process...
已经不错!建议修饰一点:The above components shall be processed according to the standard requirements prior to primer (paint) spray.Steel shot blasting cleaning shall achieve Sa2. 5（near/cl...
用我修改的吧。===========以上构件请务必在底漆喷涂之前处理并达到规范要求。Please make sure the above components are processed so that they meet the standard requirements prior to primer painting.因为有...
