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Dear Kate, I am very excited to learn that you're coming to my city for your summer vacation .Both of my parents miss you a lot, (标点)So does my sister ,Cathy . June is the best time of the year to visit the city ,because (去掉了of) it hardly rains(改有点多,不过there is only a few rain,比较奇怪) and it is not too hot at that time .There are …...
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1.excited to learn ; 2.parents; 3.of the year 改成of a year; 4.because of 去掉of;...
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excited to learnmy parentsso does my sister去掉because后面的offew改成little...
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