这篇作文是我写的,如果有不好的地方,请指教:内容是昨天晚上,我们去参加小明(化名)的生日会,我们大家给他带去许多食物,饮料和水果。还送他礼物。我们唱歌,跳舞,还玩了各种游戏。我们玩得很开心。直到晚上九点钟才回家!正文:
What i did last night ?
Last night.I went to Xiao ming's birthday party with some of my friends. We took a lot of food, drinks and fruits to him .Everyone also give a card . We made the cards by hand .At ...
I had a good day yesterday. At the morning, I went to the shopping mall and did some shopping. Everything was on sale and I bought them at a low price. After the shopping, I went t...