英语作文改错。。。日记

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我帮你重新写个吧。这个表达不太好。I'm very upset because of your attitudes towards me. I admit that I lied to you,I just hope you can care for me more and say I am a very smart kid. Maybe I am not a good boy, but you're my mother, please help me instead of injuring me.....
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千问 | 2013-7-22 20:56:46 | 显示全部楼层
I'm sorry. I admit that I lie to you. But why don't you give I said politely. Maybe I'm a bad kid. But you are my mother. You should help me instead of trouble I was injured...
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千问 | 2013-7-22 20:56:46 | 显示全部楼层
I'm very upset. I admit that I lie to you. But why can't you gently said to me? Maybe I am a bad boy, but you are my mother. You should help me and not let I hurt.帮你改了些地方,与你原来的...
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千问 | 2013-7-22 20:56:46 | 显示全部楼层
makeing改为make....
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