英语作文,有些问题,怎么改?

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I am 170 centimetres tall. I wear glasses and Iusually wear white t-shirt and black trousers. My good friend is a beautiful girl and has a head of black straight hair. She likes to wear fashionable clothes. She is as tall as I and she wear glasses too....
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千问 | 2013-7-24 11:46:23 | 显示全部楼层
I always wear a pair of glasses, and usually wear white T-shirt and black trousers, height 170cm. My good friend is very beautiful,black straight hair. Shelikesto wear fashio...
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千问 | 2013-7-24 11:46:23 | 显示全部楼层
尽量用一些关联词把句子穿起来练成长句,各种高级句型能套就套,话说国内的英语作文就是掉书袋子,我是高考生,英语127,信我没错的...
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