谁能帮忙改一下这个托福写作的开头段?谢谢

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【修改后】People are now living in a world full of revolution. Everyone is under overwhelming social pressure and competition, which come from the increasing number of rivals, so people have more difficulty① in success. ②Abundant knowledge, professional skills, as well as broad visions are essential for them to obtain③ in such a com...
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