求强人帮助修改我的英文日记,我底子不厚,又多年不碰英语,语法和词汇都存在困难。

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1. The National Day is coming.2. I started to plan my 8 days long holidays since early September and had written down many touring routes. 3.But considering the crowds during holidays of the National Day, tiring tourists groups and limited budgets, I finally gave up all my plans. 4. I decided to go back to the city where m...
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千问 | 2012-9-25 12:04:53 | 显示全部楼层
Septermber 25, 2012 TuesdayThe National Day is coming. I have been planning the entertainmentsince early September . i have thought of many travel routes. But considering the...
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千问 | 2012-9-25 12:04:53 | 显示全部楼层
国庆节nation'day-改为National Day
planing- planwritting-write decided just going--decidedto go...
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千问 | 2012-9-25 12:04:53 | 显示全部楼层
1、国庆节是The National Day;2、Istarted to have a planning that how to have a pastime in this 8-day from early Step. and thought about many travelling routes. However, taking into acco...
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千问 | 2012-9-25 12:04:53 | 显示全部楼层
The nation's day is coming. I had been starting to plan the entertainment from early August and write down many travelling routes. But considering about there would be a sea of peo...
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