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有错误,参考如下October18th FridayThis morning all the students of Grade Nine had an overall physical check. I had my height and weight measured first, and then a doctor came to check heart with a stethoscope. I also checked my eyesight. I found that I've grown taller but thinner, and it seems that my eyesight has got worse. Fro...
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千问 | 2012-10-18 20:09:30 | 显示全部楼层
确实看得人好别扭啊==不知道该怎么改==但最后一句错得很明显,没有行为动词,可以是.I hope we can be healthy forever.或者.I hope we can have good health forever....
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