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On the one hand, eating more healthy food and doing more exercises are beneficial to our health.Eating vegetables and fruits is essential as they contain vitamins. Not only milk supplies calcium element we need, but also it is beneficial for sleep. However, it is not good for our health to eat too much junk food such as ...
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