大家好,我的名字是XXX,我在幸福路小学X年纪X班上课。我很爱写作。这就是我,我想要结识多点朋友,你可以当我的朋友吗?就这些,谢谢。我想改正一下你的自我介绍: Hello everyone, my name is XXX. I study in xingfu road primary school XX class. My hobby is writing, I like writing very much. This is me, I want to make more friends. Would you like to be my friend? That's all, thank you....