英语改错 10处错误

显示全部楼层 · 2012-11-1 16:07:01

第二行：去掉"it" ，
"shops"改成"shopping"第三行：在restaurant后面加"in"， "who"改成"which"第四行："experience"改成"experiences",在这里表示经历的意思，为可数名词，而前面的"tourists"为复数，那么多人的经历当然也应该是复数
"or"改成"and"前面已经提到是两个有名的主体公园，所以这里应该用and连接第五行：去掉"from"，around the world 固定词组第六行：去掉"must”
把前后句意思理解一下就能明白
"was"改成"is"最后一行：去掉"...

千问 · 2012-11-1 16:07:01

I agree that Hong Kong is an attractive place for tourists. I will give reasons why I think so. First of all, Hong Kong is a good place for shopping and eating. There are a rich va...