its expression is (最好加that，让读者知道后面是从句，不然很困惑)individual citizens to（to 去掉） pursue good love and express love make public（express和make，一句话有俩动词！express love in public）, emphasis on real life, enjoy the carnival, full of strong humanism and religious color.(这一段没看懂啊。。。)目前只看了这句。。。你的长句太多了啊。。。...
