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My university life is very interesting and different from before. 我大学的生活很有趣而且跟以前不一样。 Though I am a new college student, I have already made many friends and learned a lot from them. 虽然我是新生, 但是我已经交了很多朋友并且从他们身上也得意不少。 Universities are different from high schools. (注:在泛指时如果是可数名词记得要用名词复数)大学和高中不同。 For example, I get to live ...
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千问 | 2012-10-26 13:05:27 | 显示全部楼层
改完后如下:My university life is interesting and different from before, though I am still a new college student. I also make many new friends and learn from them.University is diffe...
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千问 | 2012-10-26 13:05:27 | 显示全部楼层
My university life is interesting and different from (my life) before.Though I am a new college student.(,) I also(can) make many friends and learn from them. ( A) university is ...
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千问 | 2012-10-26 13:05:27 | 显示全部楼层
before—high/ middle school; 去掉though; 在I 前加and; living—live; but—so; though —and;I can't 前加maybe; by— in;两个 succeed都改为successful。...
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