我写一封信给外国人,希望各位能帮帮忙检查,谢谢。

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查看11 | 回复3 | 2012-11-18 17:10:15 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
I'm happy to write to you!改为I'm glad to write to you!We speak English as our second language改为People here speak English as our second languageSo my English isn't so 改为To be honest my English isn't so And I think I can see you and your reindeer fly in the sky one day.中是flyingSo every year when Christmas comes最好写every Chri...
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千问 | 2012-11-18 17:10:15 | 显示全部楼层
Dear Santa,Merry Christmas!I'm happy to write to you! (个人以为) I come from another country.English is my second language, so my English isn't good enough,please forgive me. W...
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千问 | 2012-11-18 17:10:15 | 显示全部楼层
And I think I can see you and your reindeer fly in the sky one day.中是flyingSo every year when Christmas comes最好写every Christmas就好啦I always hang Christmas stockings at the b...
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