请帮忙看看这篇翻译有什么地方要改进

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查看11 | 回复2 | 2009-8-27 15:34:40 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
你已经翻译的很不错了,不过我的翻译是这样的,不知道可不可以?Hate the midnight phone off the clock.One night, you suddenly miss him and wanted to tell him you love him. Your courage dialed his telephone number, who knew that he was a telephone message says:"I can't come to the phone right now, please leave your name..."What is the only hear him when loneliness message more annoying?Sometimes, he did not turn off the telephone, mobile phone to pager stations. That evening, you want to hear his voice, who knows, is a telephone connected rigid voice ask:"One of the main for?"Don't call him? You have a cold, you were disappointed with the pager player said: "ok."Since the mobile phone to pager stations, so to mobile phone? That's disgusting.That night, you want to cry, he struggles, after you dialed his phone number, I answer the phone call, you are a tape recorder, said: "I..." Then upsetly hanged line.Next up against him, he asked: "do you come to me yesterday, I have what matter?""Oh, nothing, just some of the important thing." You have to answer
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千问 | 2009-8-27 15:34:40 | 显示全部楼层
楼主还敢说你的英语不好阿,我看了都自惭形秽。翻译得不错,既然是散文就没必要追去那么严格啦。
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千问 | 2009-8-27 15:34:40 | 显示全部楼层
in the deep of night 在深夜。
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