用英语介绍自己，带汉语，分开写，女孩

显示全部楼层 · 2009-8-30 13:11:01

Hello my name is 张茜茜 who is 12 yesrs old.I'm short but a extrovert and optimistic girl.subject is English.I like pink and pruple very much.My hobbies are reading books and playing computer games.I like dogs and rabbits.I'm good at singing.I'm outgoing and friendly,I hope that I can make friends with all of you.有些词句的次序帮你调了一下,这样整篇文稿会显得较有层次和通顺

千问 · 2009-8-30 13:11:01

hello, everyone! my name iszhang qianqian,and i am 12 years old.i have many hobbies,like reading andplaying computer games,but i am very good at singing.i like pink and purple very much,and my favourite animals are dogs and rabbits.
you see,i am short in height,but i am really a very cheerful and elastic girl.i hope i can make friends with all of you!

千问 · 2009-8-30 13:11:01

Helloeverybody
my name is zhang Qianqian ,English is my favourite subject, I am 12 years old . Although i am not a tall girl , I'd like to make friends with you . My favourite colours are pink and purple . reading and playing computer is my hobbies,and I love singing, then this lead to I become to aextrovert and optimistic girl. little dog and white rabbit are my favourite animals .
I am glad to be your friend , andI am confience to be your best friend
Zhang Qianqian