i am sorry to let you konw that ,the numb of the credit that you provide is out of order,please change anther one,or please contact the service department of the hotel,thanksfor your understanding! 这个翻得比较好的。不是逐句翻的意思到了。有礼貌you can call to the department of the hotel 应该是CALL THE DEPARTMENT。。有语病 can you change another credit card 应该是you can change another credit card
Provide you with a credit card number, the hotel told this card authorization pass, please pulls a credit card, or you directly and hotel reservations department.
i am sorry , the number of the credit card that you give have some problem , can you change another credit card or you can call to the department of the hotel