第一段中:"For a bad memory of taking big pills’’. Graduating from it, I still wish to produce ‘small and delicious pills’.在说药的时候用delicious pills好像不是很合适.Maybe you can change to small and children-friendly pills这样说是强调你的药小孩子也很喜欢. Medicinal Chemistry and Processes of Chemogalenic supplement Organic Chemistry basically and practically这一句中的basically,最好换成fundamentally.是习惯的说罚.
