紧急帮我把这些英语单词串在一起写成一小段英语小作文

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New York is where I live, first, let me talk about the traffic.I beleive New York is one of the the busiest city in the world.The traffic in New York was terribel. And the street was very dirty, garbage was all over the place. It seemd street have never been cleaned. However, restaurant in New York is excellent, they have good food and great servise. Overall this place is wonderful, it has been a lot of changes over past 20 years, buildings, schools, roads and so on. New York has changed a lot.这个已经经过时态的改正了。这里指的是纽约的变化,所以以前的那些面貌应该是过去时,而不是现在时!这个已经是刚刚那为同学改过的了,应该可以用了!
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