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In ten years,He thinks he'll be a reporter.He'll live in Shanghai,because he went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.He think it's really a beautiful city.As a reporter.He thinks he will meet lots of interesting people.He thinks he'll live in an apartment with his best friends,because he doesn't like living alone.He'll have pets.He can't have any pets now because his mother hates them,and his apartment is too small.So in ten years,he'll have many different pets.He might even keep a pet parrot!He'll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week he'll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.On the weekend,he'll be able to dress more casually.He thinks he'll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day he might even visit Australia. 准确无误。肯定没问题!
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In 10 years, he thinks he'll be a reporter. He'll live in Shanghai, bezause he went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it. He thinks it's really a beautiful city. As a reporter, He thinks he will meet lots of interesting people. He thinks he will live in an apartment with his best friends, because he doesn't like living alone. He'll have pets. He can't have any pets now because his mother hates them, and their apartment is too small. So in ten years, he'll have many different pets. He might even keep a pet parrot! He'll probably go skating and swimming everyday. During the week he'll look smart, and probably will wear a suit. On the weekend, he'll be able to dress more casually. He thinks he'll go to Hong Kong on vacation, and one day he might even visit Australia.
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千问 | 2007-3-8 17:48:52 | 显示全部楼层
In ten years,he thinks he'll be a reporter.He'll live in Shanghai,because he went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.He thinks it's really a beautiful city.As a reporter.He thinks he will meet lots of interesting people.He thinks he'll live in an apartment with his best friends,because he doesn't like living alone.He'll have pets.He can't have any pets now because his mother hates them,and their apartment is too small.So in ten years,he'll have many different pets.He might even keep a pet parrot!He'll probably go skating and swimming every day.During the week he'll look smart,and probably will wear a suit.On the weekend,he'll be able to dress more casually.He thinks he'll go to Hong Kong on vacation,and one day he might even visit Australia.
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