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Seeking perfectness is my personality. As a man who lived in Shanghai, I am lucky. Both of my parents are professors. When I was a child, I learned a lot from my parents. Although thisexperience is different from my subject today, I still appreciate their efforts for teaching and training me, especially in maths, analyse and communication. In the way which I grow up , my father played the most important part .Because of the Civilization Revolution ,he could not study in a foreign country like his brother. But he always says,"Never to said no ". This encourages him never to give up and to stick to study. He graduated in one of the best universities in China, QingHua University. Now he has been a professor and a headmaster in a school. 如果需要大改的话,请PM我。 实在是不能确定楼主想要表达的意思,只好自己揣摩着来了。。。As having much experience about ERP product, I am fortunate to have many opportunities to learn about the different areas, such as transportation, media and information industry. Thanks to the accumulation of practice and training opportunities, I am more determined to go further study of information technology. Above are several reasons that I would like to come to school to study information technology.
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千问 | 2009-6-23 19:31:31 | 显示全部楼层
Pursuing excellence is my personalityAs a man who lived in Shanghai I was lucky. lives 而不是lived was用am难道你想说你过去住在上海?My parents are professors.加个both吧 My parents are both professors. When I was a child, I had been learned for my parents。不用过去完成式,learn from 向谁学习 我觉得改成 I have been learning from my parents since I was a child.好一些 意思是我从小就像我父母学习Although theseexperience are different from which I learn today, I still thanks them forteaching and trainning me,about my maths, analyse and communication. My father played the most impotant part in my growing up.你拿金山词霸整的吧 乱七八糟的字面意思……无语,后面的懒得改了
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