一篇英语自我介绍

显示全部楼层 · 2007-7-1 08:46:25

Hello.Everyone,My name is zouxin,I am a Chinese girl.I am 11 year old this year.I am in class 3 drad 5 YOUTIANDot judge meby I ama girl,like most of boys I likefootball.After class I will play football with them .小妹妹，哥就能帮你这些了，我水平有限，对不起了

千问 · 2007-7-1 08:46:25

Hello,everyone.My name is Zou Xin and I'm a extroverted Chinese girl. I'm 11 years old now and I'm in Class 3, Grade 5 in Youtian No.1 Primary School.Although I'm a girl, I share the same interest with most boys--playing football. When school is over I would ask a lot of people to go to play it.Beside playing football, I have another interest--roller-skating.I began to learn it when I was a four.If you want to be a good roller-skater, I won't mind being your teacher!Of course, I like Enlish very much for I think Enlish is an interesting and mysterious language. Learning language takes me great pleasure. So I will surely work hard on it.圆据妹妹，你好！这篇小文本可以再被refine一点，不过考虑到你是小学五年级的学生，所以部分地分做了简化处理。

千问 · 2007-7-1 08:46:25

Hello,everyone.I am a 11-year-old girl who is a outgoing Chinese girl named Zou Xin. Now I'm in Class 3, Grade 5 in Youtian No.1 Primary School. Though I'm a girl, I have the same interest as most boys--playing football. Besides,roller-skating is also one of my favorites.I started learning it when at the age of four.If you want to learn it, you can ask me to be your teacher! Of course, I like Enlish very much because I think Enlish is an interesting and mysterious language. Learning English brings me many entertainments. So I will work hard on it.