much excellent things, 如果much 是形容things 的话，应该用many吧？It must be relized that they should face something pressure这里用了被动语态，who relized? you? me? 主语是谁？something pressure 中国式英语。something 是名词，pressure 也是名词。even there are many students come from countryside family,so they must to eran money for tuition by themselves. 你的意思是说有些来自农村家庭的学生要自己赚钱交学费，even划掉， 我一般用Must/have to , 但我不确定 must to 语法对不对。so they feeling a geart deal of pressing， they are feeling or they feel. their parents hope they will become a successful man in this competitive society, 用they will be successful 好点， 否则只有man 才能 successful 吗？
