1.第3句错了，是these days 不是this days2.Thank you for giving me so prefect life.改成such a perfect life3.Please take good of yourself错了，take good care of4.I will always love u改成 I will love you forever更好5.I know ,because of your work and for me a better life,you have to be away from our family.这句话念起来不顺，改成I know that you have to be away from our family to work because you'd like to give me a better life.6.应该是Fathers' Day你第2句错了。我只能改这些了
Father's————Fathers’ this--theseat this time of the year。。。没搞懂你想说啥。。。。我猜是recently。。。 and for me a better life------that led me to live a better life。。。。。（说实话。。这句。。。）。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。对不起了。。太多错了。。。改不下去了。。加油啊
