帮我改改这短文,那里有错(英语),高手菜鸟都可来啊!~~

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I like holidays,and my summer holiday is very interesting.Everymorning,I get up at 9 o'clock. I ofent do my homework before lunch. I aways have lunch whith my families, mymother,my father,my grendfather,my sister and me. In the afternoon,sometimes I am sleeping, playing computer games and watching TV. At half past five,we will have our dinner.Then I do some homework or go shopping.In the evening I often watch TV before sleep. Sometimes I go to shopping whith my friends all day, sometimes I would go swiming. This is my summer holiday.顺便介绍给你一个翻译网站:http://fy.iciba.com/
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千问 | 2007-8-4 15:26:25 | 显示全部楼层
1.After that(你少了) I had had breakfast2.sometimes swiming 改为 sometimes go swimming(游泳的现在进行时要后面的m要双写)3.sometimes I would the area friend's house play 改为sometimes I would go to the area friend's house to play呵呵,个人意见 请笑纳
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