- So I want to do somenthing with it. (好象用FOR会比较好一天,不太清楚..- -)- First I want to make our cultures known by the whole world.(这句念着有点奇怪)- So it becone more (BECOME)- I also shoud (SHOULD)- So if we want to make some controbution to doing with the event,(some最好改成a,这貌似是习惯性用法来着.还有后半部分读起来不太顺~)- once more和any more一样么..我无知.= =)- If you(YOUR)-never before(EVER)个人意见..咳,采纳要慎重…慎重……[小学水平的某人··〕
