英语改错题

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Now the earth is in a bad condition.In some places,air and water pullution is so serious that it causes many deaths.At the same time,many animals are in danger because their habitets are being destroying.Luckily,we human beings have realized the problem.In April 22nd,millions of people throughout the world do something well for the earth.Some clean up streets and pick up rubbish,while others giving speech to call on more people to take action.But we can't expect to save the earth only by one day work.Instead,we should make every day Earth Day.Only by taken good care of it every day can we make our planet a better world to live in.
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千问 | 2010-1-15 01:58:00 | 显示全部楼层
Now the earth is in a bad condition.In some places,air and water pullution (is) so serious that it causes many deaths.At the same time,many animals are in danger because (of 去掉)their habitets are being (destroyed).Luckily,we human beings have realized the problem.(on )April 22nd,millions of people throughout the world do something well for the earth.Some clean up streets and pick up rubbish,while others (giving) (speeches )to call on more people (加to)take (actions).But we can't expect to save the earth only by one day work.Instead,we should make every day Earth Day.Only by taken good care of it every day can we make our planet (加be)a better world to live in.
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千问 | 2010-1-15 01:58:00 | 显示全部楼层
句号算一句。第一句中,把a去掉。第二句中,把of去掉,把destroying换成destroyed。第四句中In改成On,well改成good。第五局中,other前面加the,on换成up。第六句中,day改成day's。第六句中,taken改成taking
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