Honestly, His English is not as excellent as his academic grade. However, it is enough for him to get a higher degree/to study for a master(doctor).其实不用照中文完全翻的，一些词不写出来也行，当然如果你要求要照翻就不一样了，还有LZ你的词，都是大家不经常用的，读起来就有点。。。。没什么大的问题，我给的只是我自己翻的，给你做个参考吧能不能顺便问一句，你这两句是写给谁的？外国人，还是中国人？
