高分求翻译(在线等):随着互联网的迅速普及,电子商务的发展是非常迅速的

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Since the rapid prevalence of the Internet,e-commerce make an amazingly quick progress.The essay here describes the development of e-commerce nowadays elaborately,certainly analyse the choke point that blocks its development as well,and absolutely presents the advices about the solutions to make a wonderful blueprint to the future of e-commerce.
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千问 | 2007-12-20 14:34:10 | 显示全部楼层
With the rapidly popularity of Internet, e-commerce development is very rapid. This article describes in detail the development of the current state of e-commerce and aim to this new type of industry, analyzed the impact of its development bottleneck, and gives recommendations for solve the problem, and made the better planning for the furniture of e-commerce.
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千问 | 2007-12-20 14:34:10 | 显示全部楼层
本问—本文(后面的动作对象较多,会使读者分不清是文章还是文章作者的行为,建议统一改为“作者author”较妥),校正如下:摘要:电子商务随着互联网的迅速普及而迅速发展。作者详细叙述了当下电子商务的发展状态,并分析了影响这个新型产业发展的瓶颈,给出了解决问题的建议,对未来电子商务作了美好的规划。[Abstract]: E-commerce has made a vigorous progress along with the rapid popularization of Internet. The author described the developmental state of present E-commerce in details, and analyzed the bottleneck blocking the development of this novel industry, then the author put forward some suggestions intending to solve the problems, finally, the author planned a magnificent prospect of E-commerce in the future.
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