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First,I'll go to Li Jiang city,this is an old city ,it has a long history.trip to Yun Nan As we all know ,Yun Nan is a beautiful province ,so I plan a trip to Yun Nan. First,I'll go to Li Jiang city,this is an old city ,it has a long history.In China history,many dynasties were in there.In Li Jiang city ,I can see many bridges across the river,especially the Lake Li.These rivers make the old city clean and lively. Secondly,I'll go to the Shangri-La,this city is peaceful and quiet,In Shangri-La ,the forests are around the lake,the mountians are around the city,so it has fresh air,green grass and so on.And the people are friendly.The famous moutain is Moutain Mei Li ,all the year,it's snowy,so I think it's beautiful.
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