改了后的短文为:It is four thirty in the afternoon.It's time to go home.Ann and Kate go home together.The girl inred coat is Ann.The girl in purple blouse is Kate.On the way they come into a very big shop.They go into the shop to buy some bananas.Kate would like a glass of milk,too.There is a big tree in front of the shop.Ann wants to buy a blouse for her mother.So they go to another shop.There they find many sweaters and some coats.Ann doesn't like the colour.So she wants to go home.At last they go home on foot. 1to going home改成to go home2togeter 改成together3in the red coat 改成 in red coat 4an very big shop改成a very big shop5to buy some banana改成to buy some bananas6There are改成There is7for his mother改成for her mother8much sweaters 改成 many sweaters 9 go to home 改成go home 10So he wants to go home改成she wants to go home
