怎么用英语说（不要机械翻译）

显示全部楼层 · 2010-3-13 22:36:37

Dear XX,I still do not understand what mistakes I made. Last time, you said that we need to turn in our homework of three pages, including the first page of our papers, the index and the introduction. I did all those, unless I did not hear it right. Now, I have done it again and give it back to you.

千问 · 2010-3-13 22:36:37

My teacher, I still didn't know the specific point where I am wrong. Last time you asked me handle three pages homework which including article's frontpage,volume and introductions. And I have write all these, if that's wrong, maybe I listend a wrong message. And now I correct it and handle it to you for second time.

千问 · 2010-3-13 22:36:37

Professor/Teacher xxx （或直接 Sir/Madam 也行）,I still don't know what's wrong with my paper. I remember you said last time that we should turn in three pages including the first page, table of contents, and introdcution of the thesis. I thought I did all of them. Please point out to me where I got it wrong. This is the my revised work.

千问 · 2010-3-13 22:36:37

Sir,Still, I am wondering what's going wrong... As to what you said last time about a homework of a 3-page paper including its first page, table of contents and introdcution, I have finished all of them. Were it not such case, I might have heard it wrong. Thus, I have revised my work and resubmitted to you hereby.