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显示全部楼层 · 2010-6-30 21:36:15

原因是你给我的接受信上有被改动的痕迹，就是我划红线的位置，你可以看一下。

千问 · 2010-6-30 21:36:15

The reason is that there are alteration which I have underlined with red ink,from the letter of acceptance that I received from you, You may double check.这里的"改动"应该是指文件被涂改过. 涂改文件只能是alteration. 涂改账册,姓名等用obliteration这里的"你可以看一下", 应该理解为, 请你再次检查下. 信既然是"他"写的他就肯定看过了.楼上翻译的只有Statil 貌似正确, 但是trace 用的不对,应用traceability,

千问 · 2010-6-30 21:36:15

Because the receive letter which you send me has some changed marks(只有一处就把some changed marks 改成a changed mark)where I underlined in red,you could have a look.

千问 · 2010-6-30 21:36:15

The reason is that the letter of acceptance you gave mehas signs of being changed where I marked by the red line, you can take a look at it.

千问 · 2010-6-30 21:36:15

the reason is that there is corrected sign on the received letter which you gave me, and the sing is the red underlined part which i made, and you can take a look.

千问 · 2010-6-30 21:36:15

The reason is that the offer you gave me has the trace of being changed, on which I've marked on red. You'd better have a check.