Hello everybody. My name is Chen xin. I am a student of Grade 8. I am a lovely and outgoing girl and I am so welcomed by my friends and my classmates.
I like comedy. I think they are funny and interesting. I often go to the movies with my friends on weekends. I can paint and have won many prizes in the competitions. I take piano class once a week. It is a little hard for me but I am very happy . I want to be a great manager one day. .I also like reading .I likeEnglish and Chinese at school. and I'm good at English. This is me.
Thank you!
明天就要用了。谢谢，请尽快
第二段第一句话可以做适当的补充，“funny”改成“fun”比较好，funny一般是说像小丑那样的带点比较搞怪的意思。另外funny和interesting有点重复，可以把其中一个改成relaxing之类的。paint一般指油画之类的大型作品，最好改成draw。而且大家都会draw，所以最好加个well之类的修饰词。many prizes里的many最好改成some kinds of，prize和award应该用“种类”这样的词修饰，many太中式了。还是这句话，the改成different，其实无所谓。上钢琴课那句和上一句之间过渡地不太自然，加一句I also can play the piano and……but I am very happy 在
希望对你有帮助取消括弧内的字Hello everybody. My name is Chen Xin (xin). I am a student of Grade 8. I am a lovely and outgoing girl and I am popular among (so welcomed by) my friends an
i am in grade 8. 你面向的就是学生了。i am so popular in my friends and classmates.I like comedy. Comedy is funny and interesting. I often go to the cinema with friends on weekends. I paint
I am so welcomed by my friends and my classmates.换个说法会好些，外国人不这样说。就说My classmates and friends like me very much. I like comedy, 最好写成，I like watching movies, especially comedy.I
