谁帮我看看这段英语对不对?

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I clearly know that you don’t love me.But I don’t care that.Even,I also don’t know why.I do want to live with you together this life, so I’m really afraid oneday we met like a stranger,it’s so sad.Love a man that he don’t love you is not the best sorrow thing.But It make me so sad that we have known each other and we loved I realy realy don’t like this feeling. It make me asphyxial.
不好的地方,帮我改改,好吗?

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千问 | 2008-7-16 21:11:46 | 显示全部楼层
I clearly know that you don’t love me.But I don’t care that(.Even,)"though"I also don’t know why.I do want to live with you together this life, so I’m really afraid oneday we (met)"meet like a stranger(,)"."it’s so sad.Love a man that he (don’t)"doesn't) love you is not the best sorrow thing.But It make me so sad that we have kn
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千问 | 2008-7-16 21:11:46 | 显示全部楼层
不算错, 就是很多地方读起来不顺不地道!一看就让人觉得你是中文直译过来的, 这样不是太好
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千问 | 2008-7-16 21:11:46 | 显示全部楼层
....afraid one day we will meet like strangers....Loving a man that he doesn't love you .....But it makes me so sad....we loved.
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