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This was a holiday, Luck Hu just finished him high school lesson. He wanted to get a driver’s license on the holiday. He came a driver’s school, he wanted to ask some question for license. Recoba Wang is the school account service officer, he was received Luck. “Hello, Mr. Luck, how are you? I am Recoba, I am very happy to help you.” “Hi, I am Luck, I want to get a driver’s license, but I don’t know what do I need?” “Okay, you had to give me your ID and visual proof” “Oh, I take it.” “What kind of license do you want?” “C1.” “C1? Okay, I must tell you, if you get C1, you only can drive car or some SUV, you can’t drive truck or above five seats’ car!” “I know this, this OK.” “Okay, now, the first you had to fill in an application form, next, I will help you order time for the rules of the road test. If you pass this test, I will help you order coach. After you study eighty hours by car on training ground, you need pass three tests. If you pass, you need continue study by car on road. After twenty hours, you will join finally test by car. If you pass, I will help apply for driver’s license.” “Okay, how many do I need pay it?” “About 3800 RMB, if you pass every test in first time, you will not need pay it more.” “Okay, can I pay it by access card?” “Oh, I am sorry, only VISA.” “No problem.” “Okay, I will call you after one week.” “Thanks a lot.” “You are welcome.”

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千问 | 2011-8-14 11:50:21 | 显示全部楼层
It was a vacation and Luck Hu had just finished his high school. He wanted to get a driving license during the vacation. So he went to a driving school and wanted to ask some questions for the license. Recoba Wang was a staff of the driving school, he welcomed Luck. “Hello, Mr. Luck, how are you? I am Recoba and I am very happy ...
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千问 | 2011-8-14 11:50:21 | 显示全部楼层
我翻了半天,应该是对的,我查字典了。
Was that a too, Hu finished by myself a lesson from that. He wanted to get a driver 's license on the ...
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