My Day In Winter Vacation (第一句就错了，应该是one day ……)Today is Wednesday, January 25th, 2006. And the Spring Festival will（will改为is） coming. This year, the Spring Festival is on January 29th. So, we must get ready before that day. And（去掉and） today, I go home at 10:00 a.m. Because I go my grandparents’ home（去掉HOME ） yesterday to take some things（SOMETHING） for the Spring Festival. And（去掉AND） then, at 11:45,I eat some foods from（改为AT） grandparents’ home for lunch. My grandmother makes them for one night（TONIGHT）. So, they’re very tasty and nutritional. At 1:00p.m, I watch TV. All of TV programs are about the Spring Festival. At around 3:00,I start to do my homework. I eat super（SUPPER） with my father at about 6:30 cause（BECAUSE） today we eat a lot of seafood. About 7:40,I by bike（把BY BIKE放在后面） go out to play. Most of （改成ALL）the people in the whole street are in red and very happy. They hope the Spring Festival （WOULD COME）comes quickly. My days in winter vacation are all very happy. Because the Spring Festival will（IS） coming. It’s the symbol of the happy（HAPPINESS） and health.里面所有的事态都变成过去时。错误太多了一次改不完
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