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Recently, who have more impact on the worldbetween politicians and scientists has became a popular topic in public.Some people saypoliticians promote the development of society. However, others believe that it is scientists who have more influence on the world. Different people havedifferentviews .As far as I am concer...
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千问 | 2011-3-14 20:21:03 | 显示全部楼层
In this essay, both views will be discussed.删除,多余~brighten修饰错误,换成better就好~on the development of society. 换成in~did the macroeconomic control ,改成make the economica under contro...
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千问 | 2011-3-14 20:21:03 | 显示全部楼层
make a brighten world错误,brighten为动词,这里要改为形容词;play a role on the development介词错误,应为in;have been being important结构错误,去掉being,直接用现在完成时。have been doing为现在完成进行时,指一直在进行的动作或延续性的状态。动词b...
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