第一句,应该是:I asked him for a favor yesterday. 我昨天请他帮忙。第二句,candy 是不可数名词,改成:Your candy is as much as mine. 你的糖果和我一样多。第三句,understand 是动词,不能这么用,改成:The more books you read, the more things you understand. 你书读得越多,理解的东西就越多。或:The more you read, the more you understand. 读得越多,懂得越多。希望能帮到你...